Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09
review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-05-26
Requested 2015-05-20
Authors Daniel Kahn Gillmor
I-D last updated 2018-12-20 (Latest revision 2015-06-01)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tom Taylor
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-07-16
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 26 May 2015
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 28 May 2015

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:



IDNits complains that RFCs named in the UPDATES header do not get 


mentioned in the Abstract. This was noted previously.




Sec. 3 second paragraph, line 3: s/include/includes/