Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09
review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-05-26 | |
| Requested | 2015-05-20 | |
| Authors | Daniel Kahn Gillmor | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-07-16 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by
Tom Taylor
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Tom Taylor (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Klaas Wierenga (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Tom Taylor |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16
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| Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2015-07-16 |
review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09 Reviewer: Tom Taylor Review Date: 26 May 2015 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: 28 May 2015 Summary: Ready with nits. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: IDNits complains that RFCs named in the UPDATES header do not get mentioned in the Abstract. This was noted previously. Sec. 3 second paragraph, line 3: s/include/includes/