Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09
review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-05-26
Requested 2015-05-20
Authors Daniel Gillmor
Draft last updated 2015-07-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Tom Taylor (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tom Taylor
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-07-16

Review
review-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09-genart-telechat-taylor-2015-07-16

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Document: draft-ietf-tls-negotiated-ff-dhe-09
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 26 May 2015
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: 28 May 2015

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:



IDNits complains that RFCs named in the UPDATES header do not get 


mentioned in the Abstract. This was noted previously.




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