Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-padding-01
review-ietf-tls-padding-01-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-padding
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-08-24
Requested 2015-08-13
Authors Adam Langley
Draft last updated 2015-08-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tls-padding-01-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-15
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-08-15

Review
review-ietf-tls-padding-01-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-15






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Document: draft-ietf-tls-padding-01




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2015-08-14




IETF LC End Date:  2015-08-24




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments .




 




Major issues:




 




Minor issues:




-The draft's "Intended status:" is missing in the title.




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 2], Introduction, it would be clearer if the introduction would give more high level information or a reference to the 'implementation bug' being referred to:




"At least  one of these implementation bugs can be ameliorated by making the  ClientHello even larger."




Is this bug the one explained in Section 4? 




 




-[Page 2], "consists of an arbitary"---->"consists of an arbitrary"




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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