Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-padding-01
review-ietf-tls-padding-01-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-08-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-padding
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-08-24
Requested 2015-08-13
Authors Adam Langley
I-D last updated 2015-08-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tls-padding by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 04)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-08-15
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-padding-01

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2015-08-14

IETF LC End Date:  2015-08-24

IESG Telechat date: NA





Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments .



Major issues:



Minor issues:

-The draft's "Intended status:" is missing in the title.



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 2], Introduction, it would be clearer if the introduction would give
more high level information or a reference to the 'implementation bug' being
referred to:

"At least  one of these implementation bugs can be ameliorated by making the 
ClientHello even larger."

Is this bug the one explained in Section 4?



-[Page 2], "consists of an arbitary"---->"consists of an arbitrary"



Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

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