Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02
review-ietf-tls-record-limit-02-genart-telechat-dupont-2018-03-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-record-limit
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-03-20
Requested 2018-02-16
Draft last updated 2018-03-16
Completed reviews Opsdir Telechat review of -02 by √Čric Vyncke (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -02 by Alan DeKok (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -02 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tls-record-limit-02-genart-telechat-dupont-2018-03-16
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-03-16

Review
review-ietf-tls-record-limit-02-genart-telechat-dupont-2018-03-16

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Document: draft-ietf-tls-record-limit-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20180315
IESG Telechat date: 20180320

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - 5 page 6 (wording): and -> a or the or nothing? in
  "extension MUST ignore and "max_fragment_length" that"
                         ^^^ a

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr