Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-session-hash-04
review-ietf-tls-session-hash-04-genart-lc-housley-2015-04-07-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tls-session-hash |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-04-13 | |
| Requested | 2015-03-30 | |
| Authors | Karthikeyan Bhargavan , Antoine Delignat-Lavaud , Alfredo Pironti , Adam Langley , Marsh Ray | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-04-07 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by
Russ Housley
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Genart Telechat review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Radia Perlman (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-tls-session-hash-04-genart-lc-housley-2015-04-07
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| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready with Issues | |
| Completed | 2015-04-07 |
review-ietf-tls-session-hash-04-genart-lc-housley-2015-04-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review. Document: draft-ietf-tls-session-hash-04 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2015-04-01 IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-13 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: The most recent RFC Editor style guide places normative and informative references in top-level sections. In this document, the normative references should be Section 9, and the informative references should be in a new Section 10. Other Comments: For absolute clarity, I suggest a small addition to Section 5.1. It says: "Thus, the entire encoding of the extension is 00 17 00 00." I would add to the end of the sentence: "(in hexadecimal)". Typo correction in Section 6.3: "sent by the server/". Please replace the slash with a period.