Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05
review-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-09-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2019-09-02 | |
| Requested | 2019-08-19 | |
| Authors | Christian Huitema , Eric Rescorla | |
| I-D last updated | 2019-09-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Last Call review of -05
by Dan Romascanu
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Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Tsvart Telechat review of -05 by Dr. Bernard D. Aboba (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/G3ESMJPNBSjEs2RS1bO9O8mVZhA | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2019-09-06 |
review-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-09-06-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tls-sni-encryption-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2019-09-02 IETF LC End Date: 2019-09-02 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Some may have already been reported… -[Page 2], Section 1, "colocated"--->"collocated" -[Page 3], Section 2, "mutiple"---->"multiple" -[Page 3], Section 2.1, "fradulent"---->"fraudulent" -[Page 4], Section 2.1, "MITM inspection", please spell out Man-In-The-Middle attack at first use -[Page 7], Section 3.6, "is the the"---->"is the" -[Page 10], Section 4.2, "ferver"---->"server" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com