Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-03
review-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-03-genart-lc-robles-2019-12-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-12-02
Requested 2019-11-18
Authors Russ Housley
I-D last updated 2019-12-02
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Ines Robles (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-12-02
review-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-03-genart-lc-robles-2019-12-02-00
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-??
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2019-12-02
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

The document is well written.

This document specifies a TLS 1.3 extension permitting certificate-based server
authentication to be combined with an external PSK as an input to the TLS 1.3
key schedule.

Major issues: Not found

Minor issues: Not found

Nits/editorial comments:

I think that would be nice to add in IANA Considerations a table specifying the
fields of the TLS ExtensionType Values indicated in
https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values/tls-extensiontype-values.xhtml

Thank you for this document,

Ines.