Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
review-ietf-tokbind-https-14-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-05-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-03-12
Requested 2018-02-26
Authors Andrei Popov , Magnus Nyström , Dirk Balfanz , Adam Langley , Nick Harper , Jeff Hodges
I-D last updated 2018-12-19 (Latest revision 2018-06-26)
Completed reviews Secdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -14 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-tokbind-https by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 18)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-05-03
review-ietf-tokbind-https-14-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-05-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary:
The document is written very clear, easy to understand,  and content is
complete.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 2 Page 4:
Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following sentence?  If
yes, need to provide the definition as  I don't see it being defined anywhere
  "MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.."

thank you.

Linda dunbar