Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14

Request Review of draft-ietf-tokbind-https
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-03-12
Requested 2018-02-26
Authors Andrei Popov, Magnus Nystrom, Dirk Balfanz, Adam Langley, Nick Harper, Jeff Hodges
Draft last updated 2018-05-03
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tokbind-https-14-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-05-03
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2018-05-03


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Document: draft-ietf-tokbind-https-14
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-05-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

The document is written very clear, easy to understand,  and content is complete. 

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

Section 2 Page 4: 
Question: is "Very response" a specific response in the following sentence?  If yes, need to provide the definition as  I don't see it being defined anywhere
  "MAY be listed by a server in a Vary response header field,.."

thank you. 

Linda dunbar