Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tram-stun-pmtud-09

Request Review of draft-ietf-tram-stun-pmtud
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-09-12
Requested 2018-08-29
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by √Čric Vyncke
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Roni Even
Tsvart Telechat review of -10 by Gorry Fairhurst
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-tram-stun-pmtud-09-genart-lc-even-2018-09-03
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-09-03
Review completed: 2018-09-03


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Document: draft-ietf-tram-stun-pmtud-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-09-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-12
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

The documents is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits and minor issues

Major issues:

Minor issues:

1. The security section says " The PMTUD mechanism described in this document does not introduce any
   specific security considerations" yet section 5.1 talk about amplification attack

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  In section 2 last paragraph "Probe Indications of various sizes" any guidelines about the sizes and how many indications?