Telechat Review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-07-03
Requested 2012-06-28
Authors Donald Eastlake, Mingui Zhang, Anoop Ghanwani, Vishwas Manral, Ayan Banerjee
Draft last updated 2012-08-21
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Meral Shirazipour
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2012-08-21
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2012-08-21


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Document: draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2012-07-03
IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20 
IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-05

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have some last editorial comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-Consistency with RFC6325, [Page 18], below the table, "end station service disable bit" --missing dash--> "end-station service disable bit"

-Consistency: Acronyms are usually spelled out, then followed by the acronym in parenthesis [when first used]. On few occasions this has been reversed, ex. check for:
"EISS (Enhanced Internal Sublayer Service)", "DRB (Designated RBridge)" vs "Reverse Path Forwarding Check (RPFC)"

-Informative References, Ref. [802], please if you get a chance verify again the date of this document :)
I checked again on the version freely available at

, it says "7 February, 2002". I could not find anything dated "8 March, 2002".


Meral Shirazipour