Telechat Review of draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04
review-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2012-08-21-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-07-03 | |
| Requested | 2012-06-28 | |
| Authors | Donald E. Eastlake 3rd , Mingui Zhang , Anoop Ghanwani , Vishwas Manral , Ayan Banerjee | |
| I-D last updated | 2012-08-21 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Meral Shirazipour
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2012-08-21 |
review-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2012-08-21-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-trill-clear-correct-04 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2012-07-03 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20 IESG Telechat date: 2012-07-05 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I have some last editorial comments. Major issues: -none Minor issues: -none Nits/editorial comments: -Consistency with RFC6325, [Page 18], below the table, "end station service disable bit" --missing dash--> "end-station service disable bit" -Consistency: Acronyms are usually spelled out, then followed by the acronym in parenthesis [when first used]. On few occasions this has been reversed, ex. check for: "EISS (Enhanced Internal Sublayer Service)", "DRB (Designated RBridge)" vs "Reverse Path Forwarding Check (RPFC)" -Informative References, Ref. [802], please if you get a chance verify again the date of this document :) I checked again on the version freely available at http://standards.ieee.org/about/get/802/802.html , it says "7 February, 2002". I could not find anything dated "8 March, 2002". Thanks, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com