Last Call Review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07
review-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-07-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-07-05
Requested 2016-06-20
Draft last updated 2016-07-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Shaun Cooley (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Danny McPherson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jürgen Schönwälder
State Completed
Review review-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-07-11
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-07-11

Review
review-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-07-11

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not
addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments.

  Document: draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-08
    Status: Ready

The document is clearly written. It nicely suggests that counters
should be maintained to track some error conditions. I have no idea
whether there will be work to formalize such counters e.g. as MIB
module or a YANG module.

The document ends with "Copyright, Disclaimer, and Additional IPR
Provisions" which is a but unusual given that the more common format
has a legal blurb at the beginning of the I-D. I have not checked the
content (well to be honest, I never bother to read the boilerplate
texts).

/js

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