Last Call Review of draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07
review-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-07-11-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2016-07-05 | |
| Requested | 2016-06-20 | |
| Authors | Donald E. Eastlake 3rd , Yizhou Li | |
| Draft last updated | 2016-07-11 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by
Paul Kyzivat
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Shaun Cooley (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Danny R. McPherson (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jürgen Schönwälder |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-07-11
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| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2016-07-11 |
review-ietf-trill-ia-appsubtlv-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2016-07-11-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-08 Status: Ready The document is clearly written. It nicely suggests that counters should be maintained to track some error conditions. I have no idea whether there will be work to formalize such counters e.g. as MIB module or a YANG module. The document ends with "Copyright, Disclaimer, and Additional IPR Provisions" which is a but unusual given that the more common format has a legal blurb at the beginning of the I-D. I have not checked the content (well to be honest, I never bother to read the boilerplate texts). /js -- Juergen Schoenwaelder Jacobs University Bremen gGmbH Phone: +49 421 200 3587 Campus Ring 1 | 28759 Bremen | Germany Fax: +49 421 200 3103 < http://www.jacobs-university.de/ >