Last Call Review of draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03
review-ietf-trill-o-pw-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-trill-o-pw |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-12-23 | |
| Requested | 2013-12-12 | |
| Authors | Lucy Yong , Donald E. Eastlake 3rd , Sam Aldrin , Jon Hudson | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-12-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
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Christer Holmberg
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Yaron Sheffer (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Tina Tsou (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Christer Holmberg |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-trill-o-pw-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-15
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| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Almost Ready | |
| Completed | 2013-12-15 |
review-ietf-trill-o-pw-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-15-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03.txt Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 14 December 2013 IETF LC End Date: 23 December 2013 IETF Telechat Date: N/A Summary: The document is well written, and the document is almost ready for publication. Below I have a minor editorial comment. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial nits: Section 1 (Introduction): The first sentence begins with: ” The IETF has standardized…” I don’t think that’s needed. I suggest to simply say something like: “The TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of Lots of Links) protocol [RFC6325] provides optimal pair-wise data frame routing without configuration in multi-hop networks with arbitrary topology.”