Last Call Review of draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03
review-ietf-trill-o-pw-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-15-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-o-pw
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-23
Requested 2013-12-12
Authors Lucy Yong, Donald Eastlake, Sam Aldrin, Jon Hudson
Draft last updated 2013-12-15
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Yaron Sheffer (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Tina Tsou (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Review review-ietf-trill-o-pw-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-15
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Almost Ready
Review completed: 2013-12-15

Review
review-ietf-trill-o-pw-03-genart-lc-holmberg-2013-12-15






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Document:                         draft-ietf-trill-o-pw-03.txt




 




Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg




 




Review Date:                     14 December 2013




 




IETF LC End Date:             23 December 2013




 




IETF Telechat Date:         N/A




 




 




Summary:  The document is well written, and the document is almost ready for publication. Below I have a minor editorial comment.




 




Major Issues: None




 




Minor Issues: None




 




Editorial 

nits: 




 




Section 1 (Introduction):




 




The first sentence begins with: 




 




” The IETF has standardized…”




 




I don’t think that’s needed. 




 




I suggest to simply say something like:




 




                             “The TRILL (Transparent Interconnection of




                             Lots of Links) protocol [RFC6325] provides optimal pair-wise




                             data frame routing without configuration in multi-hop networks with




                             arbitrary topology.”