Last Call Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-01-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-01-08
Requested 2017-12-18
Authors Mingui Zhang , Santosh Pallagatti , Vengada Prasad Govindan
I-D last updated 2018-01-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-01-11
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-01-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-12-21
IETF LC End Date:  2018-01-08
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some
comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the
exact same text. Is that the intent? -[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active
tails"---->"tracking active tails"

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com