Last Call Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-01-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-01-08
Requested 2017-12-18
Other Reviews Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-01-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/WiMQF4CMrwlCWHTFB-bcOPTiW9o
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-01-11
Review completed: 2018-01-11

Review
review-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06-genart-lc-shirazipour-2018-01-11

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Document: draft-ietf-trill-p2mp-bfd-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2017-12-21
IETF LC End Date:  2018-01-08
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-25

Summary:
This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 3], "It currently read:" and "Now it should read:" seem to have the exact same text. Is that the intent?
-[Page 4], Section 6, "tacking active tails"---->"tracking active tails"


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com