Early Review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-01
review-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-01-rtgdir-early-venaas-2016-05-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2016-05-27
Requested 2016-05-05
Draft last updated 2016-05-27
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Will LIU (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stig Venaas
State Completed
Review review-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-01-rtgdir-early-venaas-2016-05-27
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 07)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2016-05-27

Review
review-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel-01-rtgdir-early-venaas-2016-05-27

Stig,

Thank you very much for your review.  I'm also forwarding it to trill so that the WG can see it.

Regards,

Alia

On Wed, May 25, 2016 at 2:28 PM, Stig Venaas 

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stig at venaas.com

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 wrote:

Hi





Sorry for being a bit late with this review. At least the document is


well written and easy to understand. There are no significant issues.





I am wondering about the security considerations though. Are there


really no differences between the multi-level alternatives when it


comes to security?





I have two tiny editorial comments.





Section 1.4 typo


RBridge - Routing Bridge, an alterntive name for a TRILL switch


                                               ^^^^^^^^^





Also, several places it says "non-zero" which is correct, but there


are some instances of "nonzero".





Stig








On Wed, May 4, 2016 at 11:52 PM, Jonathan Hardwick


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Jonathan.Hardwick at metaswitch.com

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> Hi Stig


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> Please would you do a routing directorate QA review of


> draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel?


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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-multilevel/


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> Note that this is a “QA review.” The document is still being worked on by


> the TRILL working group.  The goal of this review is to provide a different


> perspective on the work and to improve its quality. Hence, your comments


> will be provided primarily for the benefit of the TRILL chairs and the


> document authors.


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> Please could you provide your comments by May 20 and copy your comments to


> the rtg-dir list?


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> The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process, and guidance


> for the QA reviewer.


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https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa


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> Please let me know whether you can do it, or not.


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> Many thanks


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> Jon


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