Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update-06
review-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update-06-opsdir-lc-jethanandani-2016-03-08-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2016-03-01 | |
Requested | 2016-02-03 | |
Authors | Reinaldo Penno , Simon Perreault , Mohamed Boucadair , Senthil Sivakumar , Kengo Naito | |
I-D last updated | 2016-03-08 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Dan Romascanu
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Genart Telechat review of -07 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Ben Laurie (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Mahesh Jethanandani |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2016-03-08 |
review-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update-06-opsdir-lc-jethanandani-2016-03-08-00
I have reviewed draft-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update-07 document as part of the Operational directorate’s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document reviewed: draft-ietf-tsvwg-behave-requirements-update-07 Status: Ready with a nit. Summary: This document clarifies and updates several requirements of RFC4787, RFC5382, and RFC 5508 based on operational and development experience. As the document states, the focus of the document is NAT44. The intended status of the document is Best Current Practice. The document provides clarifications and updates to the above stated RFCs. As such it is not defining any new configuration parameters or behavior. At best it describes the expected behavior learnt from years of having deployed the solution. Operators and users of the solution might want to make note of the recommendations in the document. It would be nice, and this is not something against the document itself, to see all the recommendations in one document, rather than the recommendations spread over four documents. A run of idnits on the document yields one warning: -- The document seems to contain a disclaimer for pre-RFC5378 work, and may have content which was first submitted before 10 November 2008. The disclaimer is necessary when there are original authors that you have been unable to contact, or if some do not wish to grant the BCP78 rights to the IETF Trust. If you are able to get all authors (current and original) to grant those rights, you can and should remove the disclaimer; otherwise, the disclaimer is needed and you can ignore this comment. (See the Legal Provisions document at http://trustee.ietf.org/license-info for more information.) Thanks. Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanandani at gmail.com