Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08
review-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2016-08-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-09-08
Requested 2016-08-25
Draft last updated 2016-08-29
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -09 by Lou Berger (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian Carpenter
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2016-08-29
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2016-08-29

Review
review-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2016-08-29

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-08-29
IETF LC End Date: 2016-09-08
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Ready with nits
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Comments:
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1. I was co-chair of the original diffserv WG, and I have tracked this draft
throughout its life and influenced some of its content. I have re-read it
carefully for this review.

2. I believe it is correctly positioned as Informational. It might become a
candidate for BCP with deployment experience.

Nits:
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Section 4 mentions RFC2575, certainly a typo for RFC2475.

Non-reference mentions of RFCs are inconsistent, e.g. both "RFC4594" and  "RFC 4594" occur.