Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08
review-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2016-08-29-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2016-09-08 | |
Requested | 2016-08-25 | |
Authors | Ruediger Geib , David L. Black | |
I-D last updated | 2016-08-29 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Brian E. Carpenter
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -09 by Lou Berger (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2016-08-29 |
review-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08-genart-lc-carpenter-2016-08-29-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-diffserv-intercon-08.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2016-08-29 IETF LC End Date: 2016-09-08 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Ready with nits -------- Comments: --------- 1. I was co-chair of the original diffserv WG, and I have tracked this draft throughout its life and influenced some of its content. I have re-read it carefully for this review. 2. I believe it is correctly positioned as Informational. It might become a candidate for BCP with deployment experience. Nits: ----- Section 4 mentions RFC2575, certainly a typo for RFC2475. Non-reference mentions of RFCs are inconsistent, e.g. both "RFC4594" and "RFC 4594" occur.