Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2016-10-14-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 19) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2016-10-11 | |
Requested | 2016-09-22 | |
Authors | Lars Eggert , Gorry Fairhurst , Greg Shepherd | |
I-D last updated | 2016-10-14 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -13
by Paul Kyzivat
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Genart Telechat review of -18 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -17 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Tim Chown (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -13 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Takeshi Takahashi |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 17 (document currently at 19) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2016-10-14 |
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2016-10-14-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: Ready The current revision of this document adequately addresses my prior comments. I have realized that the draft has updated some part of its content after its version 13 (that I have reviewed before), and I think the changes are good. This document is ready, and I do not have any further comments. Kind regards, Take