Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2016-10-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-10-11
Requested 2016-09-22
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -18 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Tim Chown (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -13 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Takeshi Takahashi
Review review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2016-10-14
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg06887.html
Reviewed rev. 17 (document currently at 19)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2016-10-14
Review completed: 2016-10-14

Review
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-17-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2016-10-14

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready

The current revision of this document adequately addresses my prior
comments.
I have realized that the draft has updated some part of its content after
its version 13 (that I have reviewed before), and I think the changes are
good.
This document is ready, and I do not have any further comments.

Kind regards,
Take