Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2016-10-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-10-11
Requested 2016-09-22
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -13 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -17 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Tim Chown (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -13 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
Review review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2016-10-11
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/DUJMOVS5JyVRmE0vCAThEd5T770
Reviewed rev. 18 (document currently at 19)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2016-10-11
Review completed: 2016-10-11

Review
review-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18-genart-telechat-kyzivat-2016-10-11

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rfc5405bis-18
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2016-10-07
IETF LC End Date: 2016-05-31
IESG Telechat date: 2016-10-13

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  2

Issues:

(1) NIT: "RTT" is used without definition. (There used to be a 
definition but it has been removed.)

(2) NIT: unlinked references

I found a number of cases where, in the html format, references are not 
hyperlinked:

[RFC4342] section 3
[RFC6679] section 3.1.7
[RFC1981] section 3.2
[RFC6935] section 3.4.1