Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
review-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07-genart-lc-housley-2018-09-14-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme |
---|---|---|
Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2018-09-24 | |
Requested | 2018-09-10 | |
Authors | Vincent Roca , Belkacem Teibi | |
I-D last updated | 2018-09-14 | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -07
by Alan DeKok
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Russ Housley (diff) |
|
Assignment | Reviewer | Russ Housley |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 16) | |
Result | Almost ready | |
Completed | 2018-09-14 |
review-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07-genart-lc-housley-2018-09-14-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2018-09-14 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174 in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as shown here. Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^. Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174. The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add: #include <stdint.h>