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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst-

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-26
Requested 2011-11-08
Authors Randall R. Stewart , Michael Tüxen , Peter Lei
I-D last updated 2011-11-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Vijay K. Gurbani
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst-genart-lc-gurbani-2011-11-30
Completed 2011-11-30
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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst-12
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Nov-30-2011
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Dec-01-2011

Summary: This draft is ready as an Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 1
Nits/editorial comments: 2

Minor issue:
- S5, second paragraph --- "The procedures outlined in this section are
 designed so that the incoming side will always reset their stream
 sequence number first before the outgoing side which means the re-
 configuration request must always originate from the outgoing side."

 Here, I am not sure what "incoming" and "outgoing" side mean.  Both
 SCTP server and client will have an "incoming" side and "outgoing"
 side. So, which peer's outgoing side are we talking about?

- Abstract (and same text is repeated in S1: Introduction):
 s/to the upper layer that this has been/
 to the application layer that the reset has been/

- Abstract:
 s/The applications that want this/Applications requiring this/


- vijay
Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
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