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review-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst-genart-lc-gurbani-2011-11-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2011-11-26
Requested 2011-11-08
Authors Randall R. Stewart , Michael Tüxen , Peter Lei
I-D last updated 2011-11-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Vijay K. Gurbani
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-strrst-12
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: Nov-30-2011
IETF LC End Date: Unknown
IESG Telechat date: Dec-01-2011

Summary: This draft is ready as an Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0
Minor issues: 1
Nits/editorial comments: 2

Minor issue:
- S5, second paragraph --- "The procedures outlined in this section are
 designed so that the incoming side will always reset their stream
 sequence number first before the outgoing side which means the re-
 configuration request must always originate from the outgoing side."

 Here, I am not sure what "incoming" and "outgoing" side mean.  Both
 SCTP server and client will have an "incoming" side and "outgoing"
 side. So, which peer's outgoing side are we talking about?


Nits:
- Abstract (and same text is repeated in S1: Introduction):
 s/to the upper layer that this has been/
 to the application layer that the reset has been/

- Abstract:
 s/The applications that want this/Applications requiring this/


Thanks,

- vijay
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Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent
1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA)
Email: vkg at {bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com
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