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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2024-02-15
Requested 2024-02-01
Authors Edward J. Birrane , Nicolas Kuhn , Yingzhen Qu , Rick Taylor , Li Zhang
I-D last updated 2024-02-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Sean Turner (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -04 by Michael Scharf (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -05 by Pascal Thubert (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -07 by Charles E. Perkins (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -05 by Sean Turner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Michael Scharf
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tvr-use-cases by Transport Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/issues
Completed 2024-02-08
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF
discussion list for information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC if you reply to or forward this review.

This informational document introduces Time-Variant Routing Use Cases. The text
is well-written and easy to read. Most of the use cases are fairly obvious. In
any case, there are no specific TSV-ART issues, i.e., problems related to
Internet transport protocols.

Yet, more in general, I don't understand why Section 6 is included in this
document. This section may easily become outdated by other documents and future
RFCs. Its content is also neither mentioned in the title nor introduced in the
abstract. The whole section 6 could just be removed without any impact on the
remaining parts of the document.