Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08
review-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-12-21
Requested 2012-12-13
Draft last updated 2013-01-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Miguel García (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Steve Hanna (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Miguel García
State Completed
Review review-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-06
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-01-06

Review
review-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-06

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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2013-01-05
IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-10
IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:



- Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: GGSN (used in 


Figure 2), PDP (used in Figure 2, but not expanded until Section 7.2 


later), ISP, 3GPP, GSM, and UMTS.




/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
+34-91-339-3608
Ericsson Spain