Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08
review-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-06-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-12-21 | |
| Requested | 2012-12-13 | |
| Authors | Masataka Mawatari , Masanobu Kawashima , Cameron Byrne | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-01-06 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by
Miguel Angel García
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Steve Hanna (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Miguel Angel García |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-06
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| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2013-01-06 |
review-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08-genart-lc-garcia-2013-01-06-00
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-464xlat-08 Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com> Review Date: 2013-01-05 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-10 IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a BCP. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - Expand acronyms at first occurrence. This includes: GGSN (used in Figure 2), PDP (used in Figure 2, but not expanded until Section 7.2 later), ISP, 3GPP, GSM, and UMTS. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain