Telechat Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05
review-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05-tsvart-telechat-nishida-2018-07-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2018-07-31
Requested 2018-07-04
Authors Jen Linkova , Massimiliano Stucchi
I-D last updated 2018-07-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -04 by Ravi Singh (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Wassim Haddad (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Wassim Haddad (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -05 by Yoshifumi Nishida (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -05 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Yoshifumi Nishida
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05-tsvart-telechat-nishida-2018-07-11
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2018-07-11
review-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05-tsvart-telechat-nishida-2018-07-11-00
Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-conditional-ras-05
Reviewer: Yoshifumi Nishida

I've reviewed this document as part of TSV-ART's ongoing effort to review
key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport
area directors, but are copied to the document's authors for their
information and to allow them to address any issues raised. Please always
CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.

Summary: This document is ready for publication.

- Major Issues: None.

- Minor Issues:

  Typos:

  Page 6:
       (Stateless Address Autoconfiguration, [RFC4682]
          ->
       (Stateless Address Autoconfiguration, [RFC4682])

       (by sending an RA with the preferred_lifetime set to 0 in the
corresponding PIO (Prefix Information option, [RFC4861])
          ->
        (by sending an RA with the preferred_lifetime set to 0 in the
corresponding PIO (Prefix Information option, [RFC4861]))

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Yoshi