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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-icp-guidance-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-icp-guidance
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-12-20
Requested 2012-12-06
Authors Brian E. Carpenter , Sheng Jiang
Draft last updated 2012-12-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-v6ops-icp-guidance-04-genart-lc-shirazipour-2012-12-19
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2012-12-19

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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-icp-guidance-04

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2012-12-19

IETF LC End Date: 2012-12-20

IESG Telechat date: 2013-01-10


This draft is almost ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have
some comments.

Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 3], last line, "The most importance" --should be--> "The most important"

-[Page 3], line 3, "on a unplanned"--should be--> "on an unplanned"

-[Page 6], paragraph 2 starting "There is an anecdote of..."--suggestion-->
This anecdote could be removed as the point is clear enough from the remaining
text in Section 3.

-[Page 10], last sentence, "TLS" --first use--> "Transport Layer Security (TLS)"

-[Page 11], diagram, please add Figure number and caption.

-[Page 12], Section 8 Servers. Question: is it relevant to add some text
regarding middleboxes and expected behavior?

-[Page 16], last paragraph, "AAAA records are provid."--typo-->"AAAA records
are provided."

-[Page 22], Section 18.2.  Informative References, please update draft
references to their latest version:
and I-D.matthews-v6ops-design-guidelines.

Best Regards,



Meral Shirazipour