Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nd-cache-init-05
review-ietf-v6ops-nd-cache-init-05-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-09-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nd-cache-init
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-09-04
Requested 2020-08-21
Authors Jen Linkova
I-D last updated 2020-09-08
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Tianran Zhou
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Liang Xia (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -05 by Pascal Thubert
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-v6ops-nd-cache-init by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/_3SBtOB4G9NBo1B5GQ0Shv4XrGs
Reviewed revision 05
Result Ready
Completed 2020-09-08
review-ietf-v6ops-nd-cache-init-05-opsdir-lc-zhou-2020-09-08-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

My first review of this draft is the 04 version. I had minor conern on the
abstraction which looks like a problem state ment but did not mention the
solution discussion. And there are some nits on the acronyms.

Now I see the 05 version has fixed them all.

So I think it's ready. I did not see any special operational or network
management related issue.

Cheers,
Tianran