Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nd-considerations-06
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Request Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-nd-considerations
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Deadline 2024-10-18
Requested 2024-10-04
Authors XiPeng Xiao , Eduard V , Eduard Metz , Gyan Mishra , Nick Buraglio
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review-ietf-v6ops-nd-considerations-06-secdir-lc-leiba-2024-10-23-00
Thanks for this concise, useful collection/summary that will surely be a good
reference and index going forward.  It seems quite ready to go.  I have only a
small nit-level comment; please take it or leave it as you see appropriate:

— Section 3.1 —

   Since all the three causes of ND issues are addressed, MBBv6 solves
   all ND issues.

“MBBv6 solves all ND issues” seems an overly broad statement.  :-)  I know what
you mean, but I don’t think this sentence helps say it.  I suggest just
removing it, but you could try to re-word.

(Similar comment for FBBv6-P2MP at the end of 3.2.)