Last Call Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-
review-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-genart-lc-dupont-2012-06-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2012-06-19 | |
| Requested | 2012-05-31 | |
| Authors | Fernando Gont | |
| Draft last updated | 2012-06-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by
Francis Dupont
Genart Last Call review of -?? by Francis Dupont Genart Telechat review of -07 by Francis Dupont Secdir Early review of -?? by Kathleen Moriarty |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-genart-lc-dupont-2012-06-24
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| Completed | 2012-06-24 |
review-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-genart-lc-dupont-2012-06-24-00
(this message was stuck by the problems of the art.tools.ietf.org box but without too much trouble as the summary went through in time) I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-ra-guard-implementation-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20120606 IETF LC End Date: 20120612 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC Page 2: RA Guard -> RA-Guard - ToC page 2: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: a funny fact is DHCPv4 (which IMHO is not really over IP) is not sensible to this attack, at the opposite of DHCPv6... - 2 page 4, title: RA Guard -> RA-Guard - 3 page 9, point 6: in fact IPsec has its own issue with fragmentation... Nevertheless I agree with the proposed text. - 6 page 13: i.e. -> i.e., and e.g. -> e.g., - 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - B page 18: organisations -> organizations Thanks Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr