Telechat Review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01
review-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01-genart-telechat-romascanu-2015-10-15-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 03) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-10-13 | |
| Requested | 2015-10-08 | |
| Authors | Tore Anderson , Alberto Leiva | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-10-15 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
by
Dan Romascanu
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Genart Telechat review of -01 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Ron Bonica (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Dan Romascanu |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01-genart-telechat-romascanu-2015-10-15
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| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 03) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-10-15 |
review-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01-genart-telechat-romascanu-2015-10-15-00
Looks good to me. Thanks again for addressing my comment. Regards, Dan > -----Original Message----- > From: Tore Anderson [ mailto:tore at redpill-linpro.com] > Sent: Thursday, October 15, 2015 11:27 AM > To: Jari Arkko > Cc: Romascanu, Dan (Dan); General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-v6ops-siit- > eam.all at tools.ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-01 > > * Jari Arkko > > > > When translating a packet between IPv4 and IPv6, an SIIT > > > implementation MUST individually translate each IP address it > > > encounters in the packet's IP headers (including any IP headers > > > contained within ICMP errors) according to Section 3.3, except for > > > any address for which Section 4 explicitly states that the EAM > > > algorithm MUST NOT be used. > > > > I think this makes sense, and I at least feel this is better text than > > the original. Thanks. > > Hello Jari, > > My co-author felt the above was a bit too "conjunction-overflowy", so we > ended up with the following: > > Unless otherwise specified in Section 4, an SIIT implementation MUST > individually translate each IP address it encounters in the packet's > IP headers (including any IP headers contained within ICMP errors) > according to Section 3.3. > > This is in draft-ietf-v6ops-siit-eam-02. I hope you see this too as an > improvement over the original? > > Tore