Telechat Review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-birth-death-extensions-
|Requested rev.||no specific revision (document currently at 02)|
|Team||General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)|
|Authors||Kepeng Li, Barry Leiba|
|Draft last updated||2011-11-30|
Genart Telechat review of -?? by Martin Thomson
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Yaron Sheffer
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-birth-death-extensions-01 Reviewer: Martin Thomson Review Date: 2011-09-16 IETF LC End Date: 2011-09-28 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. More of a question than an issue: Did anyone consider that a RESTINGPLACE tag might be added? It seems like in some instances it could be more useful than DEATHPLACE. That might be more relevant for certain "objects". At risk of sounding macabre, for some "objects" this might need to allow multiple values. Nits/editorial comments: The example DEATHPLACE seems to identify the location of the wreck of the titanic. The example omits the 'geo:' URI prefix. I note that there seems to be some contention about the precise coordinates to use in identifying the wreck, though it appears that Wikipedia (41˚43'55"N, 49˚56'45"W) was used as a source in this instance.