Telechat Review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-
review-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-genart-telechat-even-2011-11-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 00) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2011-11-01 | |
| Requested | 2011-11-01 | |
| Authors | Peter Saint-Andre | |
| I-D last updated | 2011-11-04 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -??
by Roni Even
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Steve Hanna |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Completed | 2011-11-04 |
review-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-genart-telechat-even-2011-11-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2011–10–29 IETF LC End Date: 2011–10–20 IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I noticed that the example in section 3 is presented as XML but I did not see any text about adding the new kind to the relax NG schema. “ property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group" | "org" | "location" }* }”