Last Call Review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15
review-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15-opsdir-lc-banks-2014-10-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-10-24
Requested 2014-10-12
Authors Andrew Newton, Scott Hollenbeck
Draft last updated 2014-10-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Brian Carpenter (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15-opsdir-lc-banks-2014-10-24
Reviewed rev. 15 (document currently at 18)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2014-10-24

Review
review-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15-opsdir-lc-banks-2014-10-24

Hello,
	I've reviewed draft-ietf-weirds-rdap-query-15 for its operational impact.

Summary: The document is well written, thorough, provides ample discussion and examples, and even provides a change log in it's appendix. I have no objections to this document and believe it should be published 

	There are 2 nits from the nits checker for down refs.

	Overall, I found the document very easy to read through, walking through the problem it's trying to solve, addressing each add section by section, with discussion points for each, and examples for each, too. One minor (personal) nit, is the requirement that WHOIS servers that don't or can't respond to a request SHOULD return a 501 error (RFC7231). In trying to provide some structure, it'd be nice to know explicitly that the server has/had an issue responding to the request. If the server chooses not to return a 501 in the event of an error, then what?

	This aside, the document is ready for publication.

Kind regards,
Sarah