Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05-genart-lc-dupont-2013-06-27-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-07-01
Requested 2013-06-20
Authors Joerg Ott , Varun Singh , Igor Curcio
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2013-11-11)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Sam Hartman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-06-27
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05-genart-lc-dupont-2013-06-27-00
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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-discard-rle-metrics-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20130625
IETF LC End Date: 20130701
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - title page 1: for  Run Length -> for Run Length

 - ToC page 2 and 9 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1 page 3: take benefit of the first "Extended Reports" to introduce
 the XR abbrev

 - 1 page 3: expand the RR abbrev (not well known according to the RFC Editor
  list 

http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt


  and BTW has at least 3 different meanings :-)

 - 1 page 3: RLE is well known (so you can keep it!)

 - 1 page 3: playout > play out (according to my spell checker...)

 - 3 page 4 (still the spell checker): recaps

Thanks

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr