Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-04-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-02-04 | |
| Requested | 2014-01-23 | |
| Authors | Hitoshi Asaeda , Qin Wu , Rachel Huang | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-02-04 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Leif Johansson (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2014-02-04 |
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-02-04-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-synchronization-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-02-04 IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-04 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some minor comments. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], Section 1.4, "used by network manager"---->"used by the network manager" -[Page 8], Section 4.2, "In this document, the value I=00 is the reserved value and MUST NOT be used." It would be good to add if it should be ignored by receiver if used, or discard the whole Synchronization Offset Report ... -General: would be good to add caption to Figures p.5 and p.7 Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com