Last Call Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08-genart-lc-sparks-2018-02-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-02-23
Requested 2018-02-09
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Brian Weis (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Robert Sparks
Review review-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08-genart-lc-sparks-2018-02-19
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/JYzlziBccW6Fucdf0MTUfDc7nrY
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-02-19
Review completed: 2018-02-19

Review
review-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08-genart-lc-sparks-2018-02-19

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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcweb-rtcp-xr-metrics-08
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2018-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but with nits to consider before publication

The document argues to include things in the W3C statistics API in the last paragraph of 5.2.2.
Section 7 seems to say those have been included already. 
It would be good to rework both of these mentions to reflect what's true at the time of the publication of the RFC, in a way that the text will make sense when read years from now.