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Last Call Review of draft-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion-09
review-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion-09-tsvart-lc-kuehlewind-2022-01-04-00

Request Review of draft-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2022-01-16
Requested 2021-12-16
Requested by Colin Perkins
Authors Nicolas Kuhn , Emmanuel Lochin , François Michel , Michael Welzl
I-D last updated 2022-01-04
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -09 by Mirja Kühlewind (diff)
Comments
This is in IRSG review for publication on the IRTF stream. The work clearly overlaps with topics discussed in the IETF Transport Area, so it would be helpful to get a TSVART review – as an early conflict review, but primarily because TSVART will likely have useful input. 

Review my mid-January 2022 would be helpful, but some flexibility.
Assignment Reviewer Mirja Kühlewind
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion by Transport Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/fu21rbEhYwpt9u0kwX-FQ45qYaM
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-01-04
review-irtf-nwcrg-coding-and-congestion-09-tsvart-lc-kuehlewind-2022-01-04-00
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This document is well-written and provides a good discussion of the topic.
There are no additional transport-related concerns, e.g. all concerns are covered
and discussed. 

I recommend to also forward the RG last call to ICCRG and maybe even tsvwg,
for potential additional reviews but, more important, awareness.

draft-singh-rmcat-adaptive-fec might be another draft to refer to (e.g. in section
4.3). I know this draft is expired and I assume the authors might be aware of it, but
I found find it very relevant. However, that just my personal view.