Telechat Review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05
review-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05-genart-telechat-yee-2013-07-08-00

Request Review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-07-17
Requested 2013-07-05
Draft last updated 2013-07-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Peter Yee (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Peter Yee (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Peter Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Sandra Murphy (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter Yee
State Completed
Review review-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05-genart-telechat-yee-2013-07-08
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2013-07-08

Review
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Document: draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: July-07-2013
IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013
IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational
RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits]

This review is the same as the IETF LC review of this draft, which remain
unchanged for the telechat.  This draft defines DNS Resources Record Types
for encoding IEEE 802 EUI-48 and EUI-64 addresses.  Potential privacy issues
with this scheme have been soundly beaten to death with extreme prejudice.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits:

Page 1, Abstract, 1st paragraph: After "e.g.", append a comma and delete an
extraneous space before "Ethernet".

Page 3, Introduction, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "This" to "These"
and change "specification defines" to "specifications define". 

Page 3, Introduction, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "e.g.".

		-Peter Yee