Telechat Review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05
review-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05-genart-telechat-yee-2013-07-08-00
Request | Review of | draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-07-17 | |
Requested | 2013-07-05 | |
Authors | Joe Abley | |
I-D last updated | 2013-07-08 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Peter E. Yee
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Genart Telechat review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Sandra L. Murphy (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2013-07-08 |
review-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05-genart-telechat-yee-2013-07-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July-07-2013 IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013 IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] This review is the same as the IETF LC review of this draft, which remain unchanged for the telechat. This draft defines DNS Resources Record Types for encoding IEEE 802 EUI-48 and EUI-64 addresses. Potential privacy issues with this scheme have been soundly beaten to death with extreme prejudice. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits: Page 1, Abstract, 1st paragraph: After "e.g.", append a comma and delete an extraneous space before "Ethernet". Page 3, Introduction, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: change "This" to "These" and change "specification defines" to "specifications define". Page 3, Introduction, 2nd paragraph: append a comma after "e.g.". -Peter Yee