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Last Call Review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04
review-kivinen-802-15-ie-04-genart-lc-dupont-2017-02-27-00

Request Review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-02-24
Requested 2017-01-27
Authors Tero Kivinen , Pat Kinney
I-D last updated 2017-02-27
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -02 by Charles E. Perkins (diff)
Intdir Early review of -02 by Pascal Thubert (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -04 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Magnus Nyström (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -06 by Scott O. Bradner
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-kivinen-802-15-ie by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-02-27
review-kivinen-802-15-ie-04-genart-lc-dupont-2017-02-27-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20170210
IETF LC End Date: 20170214
IESG Telechat date: 20170224

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - ToC page 1 and 3 page 3 (title): Benefitting -> Benefiting

 - 3 page 3 (suggest):  CoRE etc, ->  CoRE, etc,

 - 4 page 3: reading the document I had a question about the "no need
  ... to specify the internal structure" but the reason became clear
  the next page. So I have no concern about this.

Regards 

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr