Last Call Review of draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11
review-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11-genart-lc-dupont-2015-09-15-00
Request | Review of | draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-09-23 | |
Requested | 2015-08-27 | |
Authors | Tero Kivinen , Paul Wouters , Hannes Tschofenig | |
I-D last updated | 2015-09-15 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Francis Dupont
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Genart Telechat review of -12 by Francis Dupont (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Derek Atkins (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2015-09-15 |
review-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11-genart-lc-dupont-2015-09-15-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-kivinen-ipsecme-oob-pubkey-11.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150911 IETF LC End Date: 20150923 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 6 page 6: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: IMHO the choice of the SubjectPublicKeyInfo format is the right one. - 3 page 4: is a a very -> is a very - A.1 page 8 and A.2 page 10: i.e. -> i.e., - A pages 7 - 10: BTW I used your 2 examples to add new unit tests in an application crypto library so I can confirm the 2 SPKIs are correct. Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr