Last Call Review of draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03
review-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03-genart-lc-yee-2013-10-16-00

Request Review of draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-10-16
Requested 2013-09-19
Other Reviews Genart Telechat review of -04 by Peter Yee (diff)
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Reviewer Peter Yee
Review review-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03-genart-lc-yee-2013-10-16
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09165.html
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2013-10-16
Review completed: 2013-10-16

Review
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Document: draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Oct-15-2013
IETF LC End Date: Oct-16-2013
IESG Telechat date: TBD

Summary: This draft is basically ready for  publication, but has nits that
should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.]

This draft updates the description of the Proposed Standard maturity
level previously defined in RFC 2026.  The update reflects the reality
of greater maturity embodied in Proposed Standards than is given in
RFC 2026.

Page 1, Abstract, last sentence: insert "of" between "characterization"
and "Proposed".

Page 2, Section 2 title: change "Reveiew" to "Review".

Page 3, 1st paragraph, 5th sentence: insert "the" between "IESG at"
and "last stage".

Page 4, Acknowledgements: change "Jari Arko" to "Jari Arkko".

Page 4, Acknowledgements: append a comma after "input".