Last Call Review of draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03
review-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03-genart-lc-yee-2013-10-16-00
| Request | Review of | draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-10-16 | |
| Requested | 2013-09-19 | |
| Authors | Olaf Kolkman, Scott Bradner, Sean Turner | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-10-16 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Peter Yee
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Genart Telechat review of -04 by Peter Yee (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Peter Yee |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03-genart-lc-yee-2013-10-16 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 03 (document currently at 06) | |
| Review result | Ready with Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2013-10-16 |
Review
review-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03-genart-lc-yee-2013-10-16
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-kolkman-proposed-standards-clarified-03 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Oct-15-2013 IETF LC End Date: Oct-16-2013 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This draft updates the description of the Proposed Standard maturity level previously defined in RFC 2026. The update reflects the reality of greater maturity embodied in Proposed Standards than is given in RFC 2026. Page 1, Abstract, last sentence: insert "of" between "characterization" and "Proposed". Page 2, Section 2 title: change "Reveiew" to "Review". Page 3, 1st paragraph, 5th sentence: insert "the" between "IESG at" and "last stage". Page 4, Acknowledgements: change "Jari Arko" to "Jari Arkko". Page 4, Acknowledgements: append a comma after "input".