Telechat Review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-
review-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-genart-telechat-black-2012-06-22-00
Request | Review of | draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-06-19 | |
Requested | 2012-06-07 | |
Authors | Richard Clayton, Murray Kucherawy | |
I-D last updated | 2012-06-22 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by David L. Black
Genart Telechat review of -?? by David L. Black Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Joseph A. Salowey |
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Assignment | Reviewer | David L. Black |
State | Completed | |
Review |
review-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-genart-telechat-black-2012-06-22
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Completed | 2012-06-22 |
review-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-genart-telechat-black-2012-06-22-00
The -04 version of this draft addresses the two nits noted in the Gen-ART review of the -03 version of this draft. It's ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC. Thanks, --David > -----Original Message----- > From: Black, David > Sent: Tuesday, May 15, 2012 2:12 PM > To: richard.clayton at cl.cam.ac.uk; msk at cloudmark.com; gen-art at ietf.org > Cc: Black, David; johnl at iecc.com; barryleiba at computer.org > Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03 > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-kucherawy-marf-source-ports-03 > Reviewer: David L. Black > Review Date: May 15, 2012 > IETF LC End Date: June 4, 2012 > > This is a short draft that adds source ports to the Abuse Reporting Format for > mail abuse reporting. > > Summary: > This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be > fixed before publication. > > Major issues: None. > > Minor issues: None. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > In section 3, please summarize what the "CFWS" ABNF element represents > (comments and folding white space). > > Typo in last paragraph of section 3: "RECOMMENED" -> "RECOMMENDED" > > idnits 2.12.13 didn't find anything that requires attention. > > Thanks, > --David > ---------------------------------------------------- > David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer > EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 > +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 > david.black at emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 > ----------------------------------------------------