Last Call Review of draft-kucherawy-rfc3777bis-01

Request Review of draft-kucherawy-rfc3777bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-11-18
Requested 2014-10-24
Authors Murray Kucherawy
Draft last updated 2014-10-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bert Wijnen
State Completed
Review review-kucherawy-rfc3777bis-01-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2014-10-30
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 04)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2014-10-30


Hi, I did OPS-DIR review of this document.

The purpose of the review is to check if there are any specific issues
regarding Internet Operatinal aspects of Network Management aspects.

Since this is an IETF process document, there are none of such issues.

But while reviewing I noticed this:

- section 2:

   sitting member:  A person who is currently serving a term of
      membership in the IESG, IAB, or ISOC Board of Trustees.

Are you sure it is an ISOC Board of Trustees member? Or did you mean
IAOC member. I think you did. The IETF NOMCOM has no say about
ISOC Trustees as far as I know.