Last Call Review of draft-kucherawy-rfc3777bis-01
review-kucherawy-rfc3777bis-01-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2014-10-30-00
| Request | Review of | draft-kucherawy-rfc3777bis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2014-11-18 | |
| Requested | 2014-10-24 | |
| Authors | Murray Kucherawy | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-10-30 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Christer Holmberg
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Bert Wijnen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Bert Wijnen |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-kucherawy-rfc3777bis by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 04) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2014-10-30 |
review-kucherawy-rfc3777bis-01-opsdir-lc-wijnen-2014-10-30-00
Hi, I did OPS-DIR review of this document.
The purpose of the review is to check if there are any specific issues
regarding Internet Operatinal aspects of Network Management aspects.
Since this is an IETF process document, there are none of such issues.
But while reviewing I noticed this:
- section 2:
sitting member: A person who is currently serving a term of
membership in the IESG, IAB, or ISOC Board of Trustees.
Are you sure it is an ISOC Board of Trustees member? Or did you mean
IAOC member. I think you did. The IETF NOMCOM has no say about
ISOC Trustees as far as I know.
Bert