Last Call Review of draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-
review-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-secdir-lc-zorn-2012-12-13-00

Request Review of draft-leiba-3777upd-eligibility
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2012-12-11
Requested 2012-09-28
Authors Barry Leiba
Draft last updated 2012-12-13
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Christer Holmberg
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Glen Zorn
Assignment Reviewer Glen Zorn 
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-secdir-lc-zorn-2012-12-13
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2012-12-13

Review
review-leiba-3777upd-eligibility-secdir-lc-zorn-2012-12-13

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

*Editorial Comments*
_Section 1_
s/to understand of the IETF process/to understand the IETF process/
s/ex-officio members liaisons/ex-officio members, liaisons/