Last Call Review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-01
review-leiba-3967upd-downref-01-secdir-lc-yu-2016-12-01-00

Request Review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-11-15
Requested 2016-10-20
Authors Barry Leiba
I-D last updated 2017-01-24 (Latest revision 2016-12-09)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -00 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -00 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -03 by Will (Shucheng) LIU
Assignment Reviewer Taylor Yu
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-leiba-3967upd-downref by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 03)
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-12-01
review-leiba-3967upd-downref-01-secdir-lc-yu-2016-12-01-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: ready with nits

The Security Considerations changes added in -01 seem good.

Comment: Could the responsible AD annotate each "safe" normative downref
(doesn't require community review), along with the rationale? (e.g.,
foundational or architecture document having Informational status) Or is
that putting too much burden on the AD?  I know this is a substantive
comment late in the process, so feel free to disregard.

-Tom