Telechat Review of draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01
review-mahesh-etsi-urn-01-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-06-07-00

Request Review of draft-mahesh-etsi-urn
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-06-05
Requested 2018-05-31
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Chris Lonvick (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Stewart Bryant
Review review-mahesh-etsi-urn-01-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-06-07
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/79g85eJj3sdQpOsTjkKXGeSKu1M
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-06-07
Review completed: 2018-06-07

Review
review-mahesh-etsi-urn-01-genart-telechat-bryant-2018-06-07

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Document: draft-mahesh-etsi-urn-01
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-06-07
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A simple text ready for publication. A few minor spelling mistakes.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: My spell checker picked up the following:

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   Communication Technologies including fixed, mobile, radio, broadcast,
   internet, aeornautical and other areas.

SB> s/aeornautical/aeronautical/
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      +---------+--------------------------------------------------+
      | ETSI    | European Telecommunications Standards Instititue |
SB> s/Instititue/Institute/ 
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         Name: European Telecommuncations Standards Institute (ETSI)
SB>s/Telecommuncations/Telecommunications/ 
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