Last Call Review of draft-mahesh-mef-urn-01
review-mahesh-mef-urn-01-genart-lc-dupont-2016-02-01-00

Request Review of draft-mahesh-mef-urn
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-02-02
Requested 2016-01-07
Authors Mahesh Jethanandani
Draft last updated 2016-02-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -01 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont 
State Completed
Review review-mahesh-mef-urn-01-genart-lc-dupont-2016-02-01
Reviewed rev. 01 (document currently at 02)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-02-01

Review
review-mahesh-mef-urn-01-genart-lc-dupont-2016-02-01

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-mahesh-mef-urn-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2016-01-25
IETF LC End Date: 2016-02-04
IESG Telechat date: 2016-02-04

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - I was first surpised there is no explanation about the MEF acronym
  but it is also the case on the Web site so IMHO it was Metro Etherner
  Forum at the beginning and it lost this meaning when it extended to
  Carrier Ethernet... So I have no concern about the lack of MEF expansion/
  introduction/etc.

 - 2 page 3: the RFC 3406 is not very clear about the value to put
  in the registration date. It seems you put the date of the first
  instance of the document. Anyway the IANA and/or the RFC Editor
  shall fix the date if needed...

 - Author's Address page 5: please add +1 in front of your phone number.
  (note this is the only action on your side)

Thanks

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr

PS: the document has been push on the IESG agenda since I read it.