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Last Call Review of draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07

Request Review of draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-10-10
Requested 2013-09-12
Authors David McGrew , Daniel Bailey , Matthew Campagna , Robert Dugal
Draft last updated 2013-10-10
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-10-10
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2013-10-10

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may

Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-10-10

IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10

IESG Telechat date: NA


This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some
editorial comments.

Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and "sequence_number
field" ?

-[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a reference would
be useful since it is not an IETF WG.

Best Regards,



Meral Shirazipour