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Telechat Review of draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07
review-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-10-24-00

Request Review of draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-10-22
Requested 2013-09-19
Authors David McGrew , Daniel Bailey , Matthew Campagna , Robert Dugal
Draft last updated 2013-10-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-10-24
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 08)
Result Almost Ready
Completed 2013-10-24
review-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-10-24-00

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART,
please see the FAQ at

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may
receive.



Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-10-10

IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10

IESG Telechat date: NA





Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some
editorial comments.



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and "sequence_number
field" ?

-[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a reference would
be useful since it is not an IETF WG.





Best Regards,

Meral



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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

Research

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