Telechat Review of draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07
review-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-10-24-00
| Request | Review of | draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-10-22 | |
| Requested | 2013-09-19 | |
| Authors | David McGrew , Daniel Bailey , Matthew Campagna , Robert Dugal | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-10-24 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Almost ready | |
| Completed | 2013-10-24 |
review-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-10-24-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-10-10 IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some editorial comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and "sequence_number field" ? -[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a reference would be useful since it is not an IETF WG. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com