Last Call Review of draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool-03
review-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool-03-genart-lc-even-2013-03-25-00
Request | Review of | draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-03-26 | |
Requested | 2013-02-28 | |
Authors | Johannes Merkle , Manfred Lochter | |
I-D last updated | 2013-03-25 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Roni Even
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 06) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2013-03-25 |
review-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool-03-genart-lc-even-2013-03-25-00
Hi Johannes, Thanks for your clarifications. I was not aware of the request to add a new column in draft-ietf-ipsecme-dh-checks and since I did not see the column yet I could not understand. So everything look OK for me now. Roni Even -----Original Message----- From: Johannes Merkle [ mailto:johannes.merkle at secunet.com] Sent: 02 April, 2013 4:22 PM To: Roni Even Cc: draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool.all at tools.ietf.org; gen-art at ietf.org; Dan Harkins Subject: Re: GenART LC review of draft-merkle-ikev2-ke-brainpool-03 Hi, > 1. In table 1 the Transform ID are specified as TBD1 to TBD4. I noticed that IANA have already assigned values > 27-30. So they should be specified. If not it will be good to ask the RFC editor before publication to update the table. > I saw that you only asked IANA to allocate values. I'll do so in the next version if it is not done by the RFC editor. > > 2. In the IANA section I did not understand to which table you are referring to "For the new entries in the table > of the Transform Type 4 repository, a reference to Section 2.3 of > [IKE_DH_Req] shall be included in the column named "Recipient Tests" indicating the required checks for the other peer's Diffie-Hellman public keys." > This refers to the Table Transform Type 4 - Diffie-Hellman Group Transform IDs, see http://www.iana.org/assignments/ikev2-parameters/ikev2-parameters.xml#ikev2- parameters-8 [IKE_DH_Req] requests from IANA to add a new column (named "Recipient Tests") to that Table. We request IANA to add in that new column a a reference to Section 2.3 of [IKE_DH_Req]. This request has been correctly understood by IANA, see email below. Best regards, Johannes