Last Call Review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02
review-merkle-tls-brainpool-02-genart-lc-even-2013-07-01-00
Request | Review of | draft-merkle-tls-brainpool |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-07-16 | |
Requested | 2013-06-28 | |
Authors | Johannes Merkle , Manfred Lochter | |
I-D last updated | 2013-07-01 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02
by Roni Even
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Genart Telechat review of -04 by Roni Even Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Simon Josefsson (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Simon Josefsson |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-merkle-tls-brainpool by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 04) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2013-07-01 |
review-merkle-tls-brainpool-02-genart-lc-even-2013-07-01-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013–6–30 IETF LC End Date: 2013-7–23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7 Nits/editorial comments: In section 3 the registry name is EC Named Curve In section 3 change “suitability” to “suitable”