Telechat Review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-04
review-merkle-tls-brainpool-04-genart-telechat-even-2013-10-29-00
| Request | Review of | draft-merkle-tls-brainpool |
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| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-08-13 | |
| Requested | 2013-07-11 | |
| Authors | Johannes Merkle, Manfred Lochter | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-10-29 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02 by Roni Even
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Genart Telechat review of -04 by Roni Even Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Simon Josefsson (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Simon Josefsson |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-merkle-tls-brainpool-04-genart-telechat-even-2013-10-29 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 04 | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2013-10-29 |
Review
review-merkle-tls-brainpool-04-genart-telechat-even-2013-10-29
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013–6–30 IETF LC End Date: 2013-7–23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7 Nits/editorial comments: In section 3 the registry name is EC Named Curve In section 3 change “suitability” to “suitable”